revision strategies

I liked the one where we read the stories out loud better. Not only do the other students write down their own comments, but I realize more mistakes when I read it out loud too. I think when you read it out loud its a lot easier to pick up on mistakes. The other one is effective too but i think its pretty easy to look past your own mistakes. And you might think you have all the appropriate parts when you actually don't, just simply because its your own writing.